Mock Exam Feedback

Question 1)

Explanation/ Analysis/ Argument : 15/20

Use of examples : 15/20

Terminology : 6/10
Total = 36/50

Feedback:
- More mise-en-scnene, more balanced examples from each section, camera, soundtrack, editing etc..
- More range of terminology
- State key terms e.g props
- Try to be clear which aspect is making the representation of race.

Question 2)

Explanation/ Analysis/ Argument : 12/20

Use of examples : 14/20

Terminology : 3/10
Total = 29/50

Feedback:
- Need more of a balanced argument
- Need more terminology
- Structure essay better

Overall: 65/100 = 65%